Thursday, April 2, 2020
7 Tips for Using Suspensive Hyphenation
7 Tips for Using Suspensive Hyphenation  7 Tips for Using Suspensive Hyphenation  7 Tips for Using Suspensive Hyphenation                                      By Mark Nichol                                            	  Often, when both items in a pair of hyphenated phrases have a common element, the first instance of that element can be elided, or omitted, without erasing the connection; the incomplete phrase is implied to have the same form as the complete one. However, as shown in these examples, itââ¬â¢s essential to treat the phrases, especially their hyphens, correctly:  1. ââ¬Å"The holding pondââ¬â¢s collapse sent more than a billion gallons of arsenic and mercury-laden sludge into the river.â⬠  The sludge was laden with a combination of arsenic and mercury; arsenic was not released separately from mercury-laden sludge. Because laden can serve to team up with both arsenic and mercury, it is omitted from where it might first appear; the phrase ââ¬Å"arsenic-ladenâ⬠ is merely implied. A hyphen is attached to arsenic to express the elision: ââ¬Å"The holding pondââ¬â¢s collapse sent more than a billion gallons of arsenic- and mercury-laden sludge into the river.â⬠  2. ââ¬Å"The company provides small- and medium-size businesses with service and support.â⬠  The hyphen following small implies that ââ¬Å"small-sizeâ⬠ is the intended construction, but size is not appropriate in association with small: ââ¬Å"The company provides small and medium-size businesses with service and support.â⬠  3. ââ¬Å"The 1-2 year old wolf is still a baby.â⬠  The confusing adjective string before wolf is meant to express that the animal is either a 1-year-old or a 2-year-old. You can write that an animal is 1-2 years old, but here you must hyphenate the construction ââ¬Å"(number)-year-oldâ⬠ to modify the noun that follows.  The correct full form of the sentence would be ââ¬Å"The 1-year-old to 2-year-old wolf is still a baby,â⬠ but the first instance of ââ¬Å"year-oldâ⬠ can be elided: ââ¬Å"The 1- to 2-year-old wolf is still a baby.â⬠ Note the letter space following 1  this element has no connection to to, so donââ¬â¢t connect them.  4. ââ¬Å"Marc Antony was seen as Cleopatraââ¬â¢s drink-and-love besotted dupe.â⬠  The trainlike coupling of ââ¬Å"drink-and-loveâ⬠ makes no grammatical sense. Observers thought of Marc Antony as separately besotted by drink and love, so he was a drink-besotted dope and a love-besotted dope, or, as follows: ââ¬Å"Marc Antony was seen as Cleopatraââ¬â¢s drink- and love-besotted dupe.â⬠  5. ââ¬Å"The difference between pre- and post-Civil War attitudes was profound.â⬠  The elision of ââ¬Å"Civil Warâ⬠ after pre- is correct, but when a prefix or suffix is attached (or implied to attach) to a proper noun or to more than one term, a sturdy en dash is called in to substitute for the little hyphen: ââ¬Å"The difference between pre and postCivil War attitudes was profound.â⬠  6. ââ¬Å"She felt underpaid and -appreciated.â⬠   Though use of suspensive hyphenation in the case of words with otherwise closed prefixes (ââ¬Å"The fund was alternately over- and underfundedâ⬠) is correct, avoid applying it with closed suffixes: ââ¬Å"She felt underpaid and underappreciated.â⬠  7. ââ¬Å"The box contained a stack of 3- by 5-inch cards.â⬠  By signals that this sentence does not refer to 3-inch cards and 5-inch cards; this statement is in a separate class. When two dimensions refer to a single object, link the entire phrasal adjective together: ââ¬Å"The box contained a stack of 3-by-5-inch cards.â⬠                                          Want to improve your English in five minutes a day? Get a subscription and start receiving our writing tips and exercises daily!                Keep learning! Browse the Punctuation category, check our popular posts, or choose a related post below:The Meaning of "To a T"80 Idioms with the Word TimeI wish I were...    
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